You explained the wrongness in a way that made Clark alien - so it's not wrong at all! *g*.
And the whole mate-or-suffer thing was exceedingly well done!
I really enjoyed the contrast between the first time and the future time, and I especially liked the hints about how the rituals had grown up around Clark's mating urge. It's very intriguing... *g*
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Date: 2004-01-30 03:46 pm (UTC)You explained the wrongness in a way that made Clark alien - so it's not wrong at all! *g*.
And the whole mate-or-suffer thing was exceedingly well done!
I really enjoyed the contrast between the first time and the future time, and I especially liked the hints about how the rituals had grown up around Clark's mating urge. It's very intriguing... *g*