This was quite unusual and yet still very enjoyable to read. Your style of writing felt different here. If this had been posted anonymously, I don't think I would have guessed you wrote it. I'm always amazed when writers can do that.
Lex's teasing of Clark was so very cruel yet so very Lex. I liked it and hated it at the same time. You really had my head spinning as I read this. I honestly had no idea what was going to happen next as I read along. I love that in a story. *g*
I just wanted to point out one thing that might be an error (or it may be that I read it wrong):
In this section of the story,
"Oh, god." He closed his eyes, but when he opened them, Lex was still there. "Oh, god, Lex. I--I don't... I'm sorry."
Lex laughed, a sound not entirely happy. "Sorry about what?"
"Sorry you had to do that."
Lex laughed again, this time a bit more cheerful. "I already mentioned, I think, that I don't have to do anything. God, you're really amazing."
"Lex?"
"So fucking beautiful, Clark."
Lying back, panting at the rafters, Clark grinned. "Really?"
Lex shook his head and laughed. "What am I going to do with you? Jesus, Clark. Yes, really." He let Clark pull him down into an embrace. Suddenly, he had a lot more questions, but he had a feeling Clark might be willing to answer these.
-- it starts out from Clark's POV, but the last line sounds like Lex's POV.
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Date: 2004-01-31 10:49 am (UTC)Lex's teasing of Clark was so very cruel yet so very Lex. I liked it and hated it at the same time. You really had my head spinning as I read this. I honestly had no idea what was going to happen next as I read along. I love that in a story. *g*
I just wanted to point out one thing that might be an error (or it may be that I read it wrong):
In this section of the story,
"Oh, god." He closed his eyes, but when he opened them, Lex was still there. "Oh, god, Lex. I--I don't... I'm sorry."
Lex laughed, a sound not entirely happy. "Sorry about what?"
"Sorry you had to do that."
Lex laughed again, this time a bit more cheerful. "I already mentioned, I think, that I don't have to do anything. God, you're really amazing."
"Lex?"
"So fucking beautiful, Clark."
Lying back, panting at the rafters, Clark grinned. "Really?"
Lex shook his head and laughed. "What am I going to do with you? Jesus, Clark. Yes, really." He let Clark pull him down into an embrace. Suddenly, he had a lot more questions, but he had a feeling Clark might be willing to answer these.
-- it starts out from Clark's POV, but the last line sounds like Lex's POV.