Well the ending made me sad, since it points to what's going to happen to both of them in a bit. But then I'm always sobbing whenever I get to the the end of Ai no Kusabi. The rest of the story was extremely hot, and I could totally see this as part of cannon.
Interesting choice you took with Iason's perspective. It came across very clearly that Iason believed Riki was a thing, but despite that managed to develop feelings for his possession. Also interesting choice with the girl slave. I was wondering if you were going to put her in there. In the movie it's very unclear of her place in the story, but I've read on a couple of websites that according to the novels Riki managed to fall in love with her, and Iason killed her. Or she died some other way in pet duties, but I can't remember that clearly. There is a website that translates some of the comics, but the translator does such a bad job with the English translation that I gave up.
I'll be looking forward to any other Ai no Kusabi stories you write.
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Date: 2004-05-13 07:10 pm (UTC)Interesting choice you took with Iason's perspective. It came across very clearly that Iason believed Riki was a thing, but despite that managed to develop feelings for his possession. Also interesting choice with the girl slave. I was wondering if you were going to put her in there. In the movie it's very unclear of her place in the story, but I've read on a couple of websites that according to the novels Riki managed to fall in love with her, and Iason killed her. Or she died some other way in pet duties, but I can't remember that clearly. There is a website that translates some of the comics, but the translator does such a bad job with the English translation that I gave up.
I'll be looking forward to any other Ai no Kusabi stories you write.